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Old 10-01-2003, 01:06 PM   #3   [permalink]
jackal
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Your style is looking pretty good. I do have a couple of minor suggestions though.

Try to keep your shading more consistent in terms of where the light source is coming from (her face has a different light source to her left arm for example) and also I think her crotch line so to speak is just a little too high in relation to the proportions of her arms and legs.

If you want to keep thing semi realistic (yeah I know, it;s an anime) maybe put her swords in actual places where she can pull them out with ease or make them short swords. But other than that, that's totally up to your design.

Good work! Keep it up.
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