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Old 10-01-2003, 06:34 AM   #1   [permalink]
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Flash Illustration2

Another all flash illustration, check it out. Also if you check this topic, my first one is probably still on page one so check that out too (It isn't as good as this one IMO, i think ill fix it up). Well alright u guys C&C and ill shut up now.
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Old 10-01-2003, 07:24 AM   #2   [permalink]
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Waai, that's cuuuute
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Old 10-01-2003, 01:06 PM   #3   [permalink]
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Your style is looking pretty good. I do have a couple of minor suggestions though.

Try to keep your shading more consistent in terms of where the light source is coming from (her face has a different light source to her left arm for example) and also I think her crotch line so to speak is just a little too high in relation to the proportions of her arms and legs.

If you want to keep thing semi realistic (yeah I know, it;s an anime) maybe put her swords in actual places where she can pull them out with ease or make them short swords. But other than that, that's totally up to your design.

Good work! Keep it up.
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Old 10-01-2003, 05:14 PM   #4   [permalink]
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It's good.

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Jackal has already said the lot of it; contradicting lightsources, swords that're impossible to draw, and proportions - though, I merely think it's her legs being too long. It's overall good work, a bit pointy edges maybe. As I also mentioned on the previous drawing, that could be limitations in flash though.
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Old 10-01-2003, 06:01 PM   #5   [permalink]
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well its possible to draw them, they're not bolted on, u can grab the handle and pull it down, there's is some give. Its hard to explain but they have enough give to rotate them enough on the x axis to be able to pull them out, but oh well. Thanks for the c and c tho.
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Old 11-01-2003, 03:38 AM   #6   [permalink]
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A nice piece of finished art.
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Old 11-01-2003, 05:09 PM   #7   [permalink]
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Yeah I thought the swords were alittle high up. Hey, it's flash, just move them down lol. The hat seems alittle funny to me as well. But over all its looking really really good.

Are you using pictures and stuff as reference? That would be easy for Flash as well. Don't you have your old models of the ones we made before?
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Old 11-01-2003, 07:47 PM   #8   [permalink]
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Hey

Lisa shutup, lol just kidding, hows ur sailboat gackt? No i dont have those, u do retard.
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