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Old 05-02-2003, 04:02 AM   #1   [permalink]
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anime stlye female

Please Pardon the untidiness and other stuff...this is my first time posting an anime stlye female.......I've been drawings freaks of nature for so long so I decided to take a break C&C please
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Old 05-02-2003, 04:03 AM   #2   [permalink]
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sorry I have to post two it just did'nt come out right
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Old 05-02-2003, 06:48 AM   #3   [permalink]
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Pretty good!

I like how you've done the folds on her shirt.
There're some minor fauls on her face though.
I guess I've got too much time on my hands, anyways I hope you don't mind that I edited her a bit. I used MS paint, so this is the best I can do... (check attachment)
Other than those corrections in the attachment I also find her hands too small
Other than that, you've done a pretty good job!
I like it, keep up the good work and keep it coming!
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Old 05-02-2003, 08:50 AM   #4   [permalink]
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I would have to agree with Evangelion-00. The face was a little to wide and angular for a female anime character. But the new version looks great. Now if you ink and color it....awesome.

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Old 05-02-2003, 09:08 PM   #5   [permalink]
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Looks good, vdshake. ^_^ All the C&C I had was mentioned already. It's a good composition, and good expression in the character (doesn't look dead like characters - including mine - sometimes do). Also, the pose is good, and looks natural (rather than stiff). Very nicely done. Keep it up!
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Old 05-02-2003, 11:10 PM   #6   [permalink]
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Thanks for the corrections Evangelion-00! now that you've done the adjustments she looks more like alanis morissette! MMmm...I like alanis morissette...
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Old 05-02-2003, 11:41 PM   #7   [permalink]
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mmmmmmmm....I love art, and I'd have to say that this is some good stuff , i think the first one looks like the girl from the "i know what ya did last summer" thingys. I'm not big on celebs, so i can't name her. I should get back on topic...well, as a fellow artist, I must say that it looks like Eva-00 is going out of his/her way to help all those artist brave enough to post there work!! Hey, i might even post some of my work on here. Anyway, cheers to Eva-00 and all you artists out there
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Old 07-02-2003, 10:19 PM   #8   [permalink]
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Yeah three cheers for Xev!
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