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Old 08-02-2003, 05:11 PM   #1   [permalink]
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please give me some constructive critisism.
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Old 08-02-2003, 05:14 PM   #2   [permalink]
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Old 08-02-2003, 05:16 PM   #3   [permalink]
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Old 09-02-2003, 07:24 AM   #4   [permalink]
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Pretty good!

#1. Nice!
Her whole face kinda looks like it's leaning backwards and therefore it kinda looks like she's wearing a mask. The shadings near her ear and cheekbone also plays a role with it.
I made some corrections that reduces the leaning backwards/mask feeling, hope you don't mind...(check attachment)
Aside of that I also find her ears placed too low.

#2. Pretty good!
Some disproportions, her head is too big compared to her body, upperbody too small/short in comparison to her legs, right arm a tiny bit too long...it might because of her short upperbody that makes it appear so.
Further more her right hand looks weird.

#3. Not bad!
The legs are a bit too long in point of view, that also goes for the boots.

Other than that you've done a pretty good job on the drawings, keep up the good work eh!
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Old 09-02-2003, 11:11 AM   #5   [permalink]
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Old 10-02-2003, 09:20 AM   #6   [permalink]
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Only thing i could find was the two strands of hair at the top of the first pic. Looks like gravity doesn't apply For the last one either the legs are too long or the back is arched backward too much. Hope that helps ya out.

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