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Old 11-05-2003, 10:43 PM   #1   [permalink]
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Jazzy New Character

Hey People,
Ok,i was trying to rack my brain to think of a unique weapon to put on this exeriment character of mine ,and them i came up with((DrumRoll Please)) a pair of numchuchs((excuss the spelling)) that turns into a staff and the cloth at the end can dispence a toxic gas that can stun the foe ......((sound stupid ...well yes i know but plese bear with me)) and get this,the cloth has razor sharp edges... confused,well i'm still in an exerimental phase and i like the result,I'll have to clean it up and CG it later.
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http://uploads.nulani.net/uploads/CharacterConcept.jpg

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Old 12-05-2003, 02:11 AM   #2   [permalink]
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On overall its a great pic..but the top hand(the right hand) seems a little awkward to me
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Old 12-05-2003, 03:26 PM   #3   [permalink]
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Great picture. The left side of the nunchuck looks crooked but it's still good.
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Old 12-05-2003, 04:30 PM   #4   [permalink]
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Great pic, the only thing is like already said i think the nunchucks are crooked...
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Old 12-05-2003, 05:39 PM   #5   [permalink]
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It's good.

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There's not much to criticise. There's the already mentioned nunchucks that are crooked, his left hand looking awkward ( it looks like the wrist is attached to the back of the hand, and not where it's supposed to ), and some asymmetrism in the placement of the eyes.
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Old 12-05-2003, 06:51 PM   #6   [permalink]
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This is just according to my personal preference, but I think the hair is too flat and close to the head.

The nunchucks/nunchaku/whatever are actually a pretty nice concept. If you can have bladed fans, why couldn't you have sharp cloth? Besides, it's gotta be better than swordchucks.

Uhh.. you probably don't know what I'm talking about, so I'll just... leave.
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Old 12-05-2003, 07:01 PM   #7   [permalink]
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Ah, I like the folds alot, but as mentioned above, the chucks are a little on the crooked side. I have that problem sometimes when I am doing stuff like that too.
I like the feet alot too. I noticed them right away for some reason
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Old 12-05-2003, 09:59 PM   #8   [permalink]
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::in love with the feet::

Aww, everyone beat me to what you have to fix. ^_^ Looking good so far! Keep up the great work!

::oogles the feet some more::
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Old 13-05-2003, 04:20 PM   #9   [permalink]
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i love the picture but i think that the head might be a little too big. the hair could use some work, but i think that they head doesn't really go with the rest of the picture. the detail in the clothes and weapons and sandals is really nice, but the face just seems too plain. or it might just be the angle of his head.
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Old 13-05-2003, 05:05 PM   #10   [permalink]
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Very nice detail & shading. the pose works too. ^_^
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Old 13-05-2003, 06:53 PM   #11   [permalink]
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Awww...., Thanks you guys for the comments
A really noticed that "nunchucks" were crooked but i'll fix it ((it's just a sketch anyway)) and i'm glad you like the feet so much,for some reason i like them to.
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If you can have bladed fans, why couldn't you have sharp cloth? Besides, it's gotta be better than swordchucks. Uhh.. you probably don't know what I'm talking about, so I'll just... leave.
Sorry but i kinda don't know what you mean

Thanks for the comments
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Old 13-05-2003, 08:43 PM   #12   [permalink]
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He kinda..... LoL, looks like he on speed or acid, personally. But that's not necessarily a bad thing! I really like the feet, though. Thumbs up!
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Old 14-05-2003, 11:10 PM   #13   [permalink]
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Sorry but i kinda don't know what you mean

Thanks for the comments
Swordchucks... it's an 8-bit Theater (popular sprite webcomic) gag. Don't worry about it; some things aren't meant to be understood.
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