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Old 19-05-2003, 08:08 PM   #1   [permalink]
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.:~LiLac AnGel~:.

Well, i drew this for my mum...coz im sweet, and kind and innocent. Ok ok, its a substitute for not being able to bake cookies I suck at cooking, OMG it was horrible!!!! this one time, with this can of beans....erm yes well anyways, i coloured it in photoshop which i s a medium I am NOT comfortable with at all, but hell...gotta learn sometime, eh?

so what if the title aint original either.. sue me meh


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Old 20-05-2003, 04:20 PM   #2   [permalink]
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I like the colors and concept and everything, but it just seems like the torso pose goes all wrong after the waist. I think it's the hips... the inside line of the right leg is placed too far back or something.

I just noticed this, but the streak of hair near her ear looks too light... it looks kind of like her ear is stretching out toward her hair. Hmm.. maybe it's just my laptop displaying the colors too brightly.
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Old 21-05-2003, 10:11 AM   #3   [permalink]
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I think you did well on the coloring XD I like her dress too ^_^
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Old 21-05-2003, 04:30 PM   #4   [permalink]
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It's good.

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There's something to criticise in any drawing, the hard part is finding it; I think I did this time. a) There's some asymmetrism, the lenght of her arms to mention one. b) Has already been discovered by Megumi H. c) Lastly; proportion. Her legs are too long.
Nice concept and colouring.
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Old 23-05-2003, 08:19 AM   #5   [permalink]
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You know I love your art (or you SHOULD know, at any rate) but this one doesn't ring as true with me as your other pieces have. I think it's the coloring job, which is ALL purple colors to me. Spice it up a bit with some contrasting colors. You've got some serious talent.
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Old 23-05-2003, 01:58 PM   #6   [permalink]
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I agree that it may be overly purple. Depending what you want the eye to be drawn to (i.e. the girl or the crystal) toss in a bit of a contrasting color. Any other C&C I have has been mentioned.
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Old 23-05-2003, 10:59 PM   #7   [permalink]
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I agree that you may have overdone the purple, and that the left arm seems longer than the right. I think the shininess on the hair may be a scooch overdone, as well. Beautiful picture, nonetheless!
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Old 25-05-2003, 01:24 AM   #8   [permalink]
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I agree that it may be overly purple. Depending what you want the eye to be drawn to (i.e. the girl or the crystal) toss in a bit of a contrasting color. Any other C&C I have has been mentioned.

There can never be too much purple. Let the purple reign true!

I love it.
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Old 28-05-2003, 09:43 PM   #9   [permalink]
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thought i already posted a response to this... huh

newayz.... sweeeeeeeet!



uhhh in that case ill think ill pass on the main course and dessert... check please!






or is it desert... huh... better figure that one out straight b4 they kick me out of penn..... before i even get there

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