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Old 05-05-2003, 06:42 PM   #1   [permalink]
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Tennis Girl

http://dynamic3.gamespy.com/~soaworl...-23834-006.jpg
This is my 6th CG. Please comment on it. Anything is welcome.
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Old 05-05-2003, 06:46 PM   #2   [permalink]
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This pic is very cool, the only thing i really dislike is the lack of detail on her hand.
Other then that its great!
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Old 05-05-2003, 07:13 PM   #3   [permalink]
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If I could CG like you, I'd be running my own webmanga! Very good, as usual.

You seem like the kind of person to be making anime caricatures of all your schoolmates. ^_~
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Old 05-05-2003, 08:58 PM   #4   [permalink]
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Heh, sounds like a good idea to me. ^_^
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Old 05-05-2003, 09:12 PM   #5   [permalink]
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Great coloring job!
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Old 06-05-2003, 02:14 AM   #6   [permalink]
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itresting, i like it, and the CG is good
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Old 06-05-2003, 02:27 AM   #7   [permalink]
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The ball is kind of underdone for how clean the rest of the pic is... and I think she should be looking at the ball... but that's just my personal opinion.

It's good though, I like.
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Old 06-05-2003, 09:26 AM   #8   [permalink]
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It's a really cute pic and nice pose and such.
The lack of detail on her right hand has been mentioned and also her left arm and hand look really skinny compared to her right. I guess it could just be the perspective but it still looks a bit odd.^^;;
But as said, it's a really cute pic and you did a nice job on the coloring aswell. Nicely done. ^_^
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Old 06-05-2003, 04:18 PM   #9   [permalink]
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like someone already said, it's very nice but it needs more detail. it's pretty simple and sketchy. i like it but i agree that it needs more detail.
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Old 06-05-2003, 06:50 PM   #10   [permalink]
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The entire pic? Just the CG'ing or the ink work?
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Old 07-05-2003, 11:23 AM   #11   [permalink]
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Hey, you've done a pretty good job with this particular picture you've posted. Well done.

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Personally, though, I think her head is much too large and that the bottom half of her body (specifically around the hips) isn't quite in proportion with the rest of her body.

Her right hand (left to us- up in the air) looks a bit too big, though.
You've done a terrific job. Great lineart, great coloring... The only complaint that I really have is the one I made about her head being a bit too large. Other than that, marvelous job! Well done
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Yeah, i've noticed more complaints about that than anything; however it's something i'll do naturally.
My next pic is .. well .. a surprise that most of you will like. It's a character most are familiar with.
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